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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-04-22 01:32 PM


You Found Me

I had wandered far from your light I was lost and felt alone
My world was filled with petty jealousies and insubstantial foam
I had lost my way and been diverted away by glittering lies
I’d fallen into despair lost in a cold world of shattered sighs
You found me lying in that house where despair imprisoned me
Your words magically released me from those chains of misery
Into that world of dark pain you spread your glorious light
Warming me through filling my eyes with your beauteous sight

Forlorn and bedraggled I had roamed to places full of fears
My spirit had spiraled downward and I was awash with tears
I had listened to promises that lied offering me hope’s beauty
Believed that lust was a true child of pure love not a fallacy
You whispered the words that settled within my unworthy soul
And although I was full of mistrust you filled the empty hole
Without a word of condemnation you turned me right around
Faced me toward truth and in your eyes my peace is found

Bereft of good intentions I had lost myself in a pit of pain
My eyes couldn’t see truth and I doubted I would again
I had seen much that wasn’t real and lost my hope in it all
I’d become stupid and deaf not listening for truth’s pure call
You spoke my name in accents that my heart heard clearly
Showed me there was much more, that you loved me dearly
You gave me your hand and filled me with your truths grace
Revealed your tender love for me it shines from your face


Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Amuse_mi
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1 posted 2001-04-22 01:42 PM


  I am a newbie here, so this is my first post.  This is a beautiful piece and I have a great appreciation for it.  I have been where you wrote about, in fact I think I still have one foot in that place, and I am trying to yank free.  Thank you.  It is truly a beatiful work.
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2 posted 2001-04-22 01:46 PM


I kept reading trying to see who had done this for you.  Maybe God?  Or perhaps just someone who could see the real you.  Anyway it was a good poem and held my attention.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-04-22 02:15 PM


MarshaLove~
It is so very plain to see
you are now far from that misery
Gracing us with words so sweet
as to sweep us from our feet

The Phoenix Circle of friends indeed
have called you forth to fill a need
Spreading sunshine from your smile
within a heart that is so worthwhile

Always kindly gracing those who
would share a kindness with you too
Loving, gentle, kind and strong
holding friendships hand - come along

You are just the greatest treasure
counting friendship in full measure
Thinking of others in your rhyme
I think you're special for all time !

*Oh ... and not to mention INSPIRATIONAL !
You ARE THE LIGHT !
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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