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Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
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Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-22 09:31 AM






When you see only in black and white
you miss the flags waving
over the International Center
celebratory runners mean nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss the sky changing colors
throughout the year
artists straining to capture passions
of sunset mean nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss reflections of mist
rising above a green tree line
the stories of returning hikers
mean nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss yellow, orange, red, blue,
green and all colors in between
a child’s crayon box means nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss the gentle nuances of aging
into gray, its sweetness
and the smiles from strangers mean nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss seeing the red blood
spilled on your behalf and refrains
of a national anthem means nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss this Old World of give and take
and native cultures with their language
and dress mean nothing.

When you see only in black and white

you see only flat

the world has ended

and you forgot to die.

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Graphics:Oliviero Toscani
Music:midifiles, Jazz1

"I am not now that which I have been."

© Copyright 2001 Mabel A. Dilley - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-04-22 09:38 AM


Julian,
Excellent write, point well taken, enjoyed the read.

Packratmike
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2 posted 2001-04-22 09:40 AM


When you see only in black and white
you miss seeing the red blood
spilled on your behalf and refrains
of a national anthem means nothing.


Fantastic, moving poetry.  Marvelous imagery.  I loved this one.

Mike

Martie
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3 posted 2001-04-22 10:31 AM


There are many things to be seen, if we just look with our heart.  This was wonderful!
Mabel A. Dilley
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4 posted 2001-04-22 01:40 PM


Thank you Seymour, Packratmike and Martie. It seems we shall never get the point: diversity equals inclusion. I teach at a community college a course very close to that sentiment, and each winter quarter students are amazed.  ~Shalom, Julian

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-04-22 02:27 PM


Julian~
This is so well-crafted.

'When you see only in black and white
you miss the gentle nuances of aging
into gray, its sweetness
and the smiles from strangers ...'


And sometimes 'smiles from strangers' mean EVERYTHING !

Oh ... what a lovely look at gray !
~*Marge*~

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Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2001-04-22 02:41 PM


Oh, Julian I like this poem. Both the message and you writing.  I enjoyed.  Joyce
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-04-22 03:05 PM


When you see only in black and white
you miss seeing the red blood
spilled on your behalf and refrains
of a national anthem means nothing.

When you see only in black and white
you miss this Old World of give and take
and native cultures with their language
and dress mean nothing.

When you see only in black and white

you see only flat

the world has ended

and you forgot to die.
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outstanding message on acceptance and diversity...
when we see each other only by color,
we are blinded to humanities charity.
very cool poem, on a subject near to my heart.
well done JL  

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
8 posted 2001-04-23 12:46 PM


Thank you very much for your kind remarks Marge, Joyce, Janet. ~Shalom, Julian

"I am not now that which I have been."

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