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Passions Gallery: Greeneyes (delicate weaver)
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Passions Gallery: Greeneyes (delicate weaver) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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delicate weaver spin for us from the t h r e a d of life the cloth of your words the colors of each l i n e reflecting in your Greeneyes and revealing a tapestry of love for us to clothe ourselves with and when we cover our hearts with this work of your hands we can feel its warmth the t h r e a d s that you've chosen now repair our broken hearts and when the last knot is tied we are again made whole thanks to your t h r e d s delicate weaver --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, not only is this absolutely worthy of GreenEyes, but she should print it off and frame it, you've presented it so beautifully! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautifully done Sven...I just love how you do these!  SEA |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sven, Nicely done, sir. Lauren will love this. Michael Proust- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow Sven, impressed here. You've really got a knack for these. This is wonderful. And very giving of you to write these for the poets. I'm sure she'll be overjoyed. Take care. *Peace. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Nicely done, enjoyed the read. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very cool! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - phew, you do write them well! Very well! BC |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful tribute Sven, you are wonderful at this!  *Krista Knutson* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a perfect description of Lauren..you did good *s ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Nicely portrayed word-picture of our GreenEyes~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Quiet and beautiful. Thats how I see this poem. A very serene read my friend, one that can be read and enjoyed more than once. Deb |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
Very gentle and beautiful. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, thank you. . . James, thank you as well Sir. . . SEA, glad that you like reading these as much as I like writing them. . . Michael, thank you. . . I hope that she does. . . SpitFire, thank you for reading. . . and I'm glad that everyone likes these. . . Sy, always good to see you stopping by Sir. . . JLR, thanks!!! BC, glad that you liked Sir. . . Alwye, thank you very much. . . Maureen, thank you. . . I try very hard to capture the person. . . Marge, thank you my friend. . . Blooming Rose, if you see this poem that way, then you know how I see the words and the writer that I've shown. . . thank you. . . Tamma, thank you!! --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely work! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
As beautiful as the poetess you speak of Sven........wonderful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven, you touch us all with your words....I am honored to read this, and be a part of this poet gallery....thank you....  Sincerely Lauren *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How did I miss this? Lovely. Joyce |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is exquisite. You do have a way with your own weave of the thread. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Indeed, she does write beautifully, and you write beautifully of her ability and herself. Forgive me for not getting to this sooner, Sven Pen. Magic happens again here. *sigh* still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sevn, all I can add is that I agree with ALL the above. Really liked this. jwesley |
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