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a pleed to god ( and the public) |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
As I stare at the skies beyond our reach I seem to feel safe with GOD as my preach So many questions to ask To the lord him self But the answers are just painful tasks Its just GOD’S will, so my skills are behind some mask Till he says I’m ready, to forfeit my tasks A last prayer, 4 this world we live in When I do wrong, just help me shut my breathing It’s best to give, than to start receiving Not receive, and then try the giving Till the last day GOD cared for his son If it were for him …we would all be gone But his son just cared for us people He is gone but u still feel him near u And his watching no harm can gets near u GOD… Is wrong for us to fear u The world just needs to try to hear u Not by wars...fighting scars…or cars Or cages which destroys the human spirit What’s life’s meaning Just to give love…and expect to start receiving But all the answers are just too deceiving |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You raise some very important points here, Juan... Keep asking the questions - Perhaps the answers will become more clear in time.. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
We live in a continuum of giving/receiving/growing in spirit and grace, soon we are amazed at our maturity of spirit and knowledge; life looks more full than empty, our skills more useful than idle, our persona lives more peaceful than warlike; the earth turning over smells fresher and more nurturing. It is difficult to believe in the unseen, the not spoken until our hearts speak their own messages and we find that we are changed. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very thought provoking poem! I enjoyed the questions and reading the poem. Take Care! ethome |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
thanx every one ...........i really apreciate u reading my pleads ....thanx |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
thanx every one ...........i really apreciate u reading my pleads ....thanx |
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