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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-04-21 08:18 PM



Storms

thunderstorms touching
closer to my core, and more
light’ning striking chords

cottonwoods dancing
soft green flickers in last light
light’ning strikes again

rumbling calls the rain
blue-gray clouds billow refrain
light’ning lights again

nature’s calling me
come to me, naturally
light the core in me

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

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1 posted 2001-04-21 09:38 PM


I like this.  You tell the story of lightening well.  Joyce
Tessa
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2 posted 2001-04-21 09:43 PM


I enjoyed the picture with your poem.  Nicely done.
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This is my most favorite kind of weather.....it rocks my soul....I just got a CD that plays for an hour and it's all thunder storm and rain sounds.....ahhha.....heaven!!! So my point is, I love this!    SEA
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4 posted 2001-04-22 12:15 PM


One good storm deserves another -  
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5 posted 2001-04-22 11:57 AM


I would say that you know the storm very well Lady. . .

wonderful. . .  

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6 posted 2001-04-22 12:08 PM


Striking!
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7 posted 2001-04-26 07:26 PM


how enlight'g this is..
Nice write.

Bernie



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Bernie Slicker

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