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A Heart Is Blowing ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Heart Is Blowing ... ~*Marge Tindal*~  A heart is blowing in the wind this night I can hear it sadly moan Gusting across a vacant abyss breaking on it's own A heart is blowing in the wind tonight if you listen really close You will hear the tumbling pieces that are hurting someone the most In the wind tonight, a heart is blowing tearing someone's world apart The chilling current of separation is breaking a once-warm heart I don't think that I can catch it or stop it in it's flight A heart is blowing in the wind so alone I fear it won't last the night A heart was blowing in the wind tonight Mariah's fury now is spent Scattered pieces of a heart are lost in sorrow's windy descent *With thanks for the inspirational line 'A heart is blowing in the wind tonight' from OneSlickLady in her 'Heart Motion'* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, talk about touching hearts....a keeper, my friend, that is, if you don't mind... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge...your poem is so beautiful & i am so flattered i inspired you....helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm so glad that you can sense these things...but I've often wondered if it ever bothered you....this is yet another thoughtful beauty!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well done I enjoyed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ wonderfully done....this is a heart tugger!! SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I read Helen's phrase and it just had to be written. Me mind if you 'keep' one ? LOL ! That's why I write, girlfriend !  OneSlickLady~ Helen, thank you for graciously letting me use the phrase~ It spoke to my heart and I was compelled to write it. I so appreciate the inspiration. Serenity~ To 'feel' is to write. I see - I do ! Never have been 'bothered' by the gift. It just is something that comes so naturally for me. Thank you for asking. I'll get to your e-mail in a bit.  Seymour~ Thank you friend. SEA~ I appreciate that you would let it tug your heart. I enjoy the kinship I feel with you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
In the wind tonight, a heart is blowing tearing someone's world apart The chilling current of separation is breaking a once-warm heart That would be mine? *S* I'm sorry... I didn't mean to disturb you... tried to keep the screams silent but whimpers will slip through. Beautiful, Marge... a phrase becomes a work of art when introduced to your pen. *S* |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A 'Marge' treasure - I too will put this in my 'box' - beautiful |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Marge, this has got to be one of your 'many' bests that I have had the priviledge to read and like our friends have stated above, I too am locking this up in my library sweetie... Hugs2uDearPoetFriend ~coco~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Marge, simply beautiful. It's gotta be a keeper hon! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Oh, sweet friend~ *Hugs* to you always. Thank your for your kind reply. Wilfred~ Everyone is so kind to me ~ Thank you for enjoying what I do ~ CoCo~ I am so pleased to have received the inspiration for this one~ I am a fortunate poet to have wonderful friends to share my thoughts with. Thank you ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know what I love best about your poetry, it is the fact that you truly do read others and from that comes some inspiration at times to do a piece. I often wonder how many truly read (really read) and understand the poetry they read. It truly comforts me to know that you connected with a piece and from that was born another, this is the mind of a true poet! Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Thank you for the nice compliment. I DO read ... and enjoy so many wonderfully talented poets. The inspirational thoughts just jump in my inkwell ... and that's how they start. I just thank everyone for their words ~ This circle grows with inspiration. *Hugs* to you, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And if you could "see" the blowing pieces, then you would find that the skies are filled as drops of rain by the many broken hearts this world contains. This is a good write, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A heart is blowing, and with the gentle sweep of your pen it is a sweet sirrocco, I enjoyed this very much Marge, Regards, Olias. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
They do call the wind Mariah. Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a wonderful inspired piece Margie...well penned, loved it. ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
beautiful..LP |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your poetry is always lovely and this is no exception. Joyce |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
This really touched me. You have such a caring heart. |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
marge, it is good to hear your poetry agian i finally made it back here to thr forums. the baby is here and everything is good. your poem reminds me of my life right now, i forgot how comforting this place can be. amber |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Delightful, Marge! I really enjoyed the way you placed the italicized lines differently in all of the stanzas, it added a great feel! This poem has such a marvelous aura to it, and the picture helps a lot too. Very interesting, and well done indeed! I applaud you.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Sometimes I think I must 'see' them ... for the thoughts of others flow to me. Thank you, my friend. OLIAS~ Oh, I love to read of the Sirocco winds. They are quite inspirational themselves. Thank you. InterLoper~ Thank you for noticing ... It's such a lovely name for the wind. Tracie~ Thanks, lovie. It's so good to see you here. LatinPassion~ Thank you. Joyce~ Such a lovely thing for you to say. Thank you so much. AmuseMi~ I appreciate that. Thank you. AMBER ! !!  Doll ... how are you ? I expect an immediate e-mail about the baby ! AllanR~ Thank you very much for your thoughtful reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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