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Open Poetry #13

Keeper Of The Light

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-21 02:58 PM

Keeper Of The Light

In silent dreams of yesterday
Hearing music of the sea
In voice across the waves, that sway
And dance her melting heart for thee
Standing lone, she lights her keep
Vanilla scenting on her mind
In silent dreams, her vigil sleeps
Till comes the morn and voice she finds
Of ships that sail her body, blue
Or rest upon her soft white beach
She's lived courageous, standing tall
As eyes behold return of each.

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-21 03:03 PM

I can see the light, smell the delicate vanilla scent. Beautifully written!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-21 03:14 PM

Ah yes....a keeper....

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-04-21 03:33 PM

A lighthouse? And do we all have one within us perhaps?

I enjoyed this.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-04-21 03:38 PM

Sweet, tender images...I'm a lighthouse nut!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-04-21 04:23 PM

Nakd,
Nice write enjoyed the read.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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PA

6 posted 2001-04-21 07:20 PM

nakdthoughts,

I like this very much

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-22 02:19 AM

the light shines in all of us. . .

excellent. . .

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