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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-21 09:13 AM



she leaned back in her tub
floating petals all around
her shoulder length hair
framing face

the silence of gaze
from the eyes watching her
spoke more then from his lips
could escape

vanilla, the scent,
candlelit only
his eyes could see through
her desire

the white foam,
rose petals, could not
hide the warmth igniting
intensely his fire

her eyes closed
and viewing
her minds screen of thoughts
she worshiped each touch
of his kiss

the feelings, arousal
of each body part, speaks
to these moments
of bliss

she wipes away moisture
and tears from her eyes
demanding, her thoughts
are to hold

she aches for the pleasures
she's taken to heart
as his eyes pierce and speak
to her soul.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-04-21 09:17 AM


Good morning Wynter...thank you for this...
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-04-21 09:24 AM


Good Morning to you, too...and isn't it a bright sunshiny day today....

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware
3 posted 2001-04-21 10:56 AM


candles - soft scents - sweet (bittersweet?) memories - such stuff dreams are made of -
you write to our hearts

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-04-23 10:22 AM


Wow! It IS a bright morning  

Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-04-23 10:27 AM


Wilfred

your heart...my heart...we all write  from them to them and with them..thank you Bill  huggsss

Maureen


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It's about time you read this  

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-04-23 10:47 AM


sounds like a fantastic seduction scene to me!!!!!!!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2001-04-23 11:46 AM


yes..I love my old tub it's what  movie scenes are made of...*s
thanks Kathleen  huggzz to you

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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