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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-04-21 04:36 AM


one hand
in timid reach/retreat
one tongue
in mute of all entreat
one touch
enough to pledge a vow
one silence
speaking volumes---LOUD.

two eyes
in timid reach/retreat
two hands
entwined, fingers complete
two tongues in language
without speak
two--as one--
creation's peak.

Three?
Is but result of "WE"-
an ocean born of river...
Four
a mystery longs for more-
a desert's night in shiver.

Add them and then count again.
The elements add up to ten.
After nine? Time after time,
with ten we must begin again.

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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1 posted 2001-04-21 04:41 AM


Gosh if i add all the number up in your write i come up with 48, but i noticed that the math your doing in not that simple......
LIFE as each of us know it.

Bernie





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serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-04-21 04:50 AM


Oh bernie, love, it's not that complicated...1+2+3+4=10----it's a numerology thing! No adding machine necessary!   Thanks for popping in...sorry you too are insomnia bound t'nite!
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3 posted 2001-04-21 04:53 AM


oh i got that math you were doing, was just pulling your chain....
Bernie



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4 posted 2001-04-21 08:52 AM


one hand
in timid reach/retreat
one tongue
in mute of all entreat
one touch
enough to pledge a vow
one silence
speaking volumes---LOUD.

two eyes
in timid reach/retreat
two hands
entwined, fingers complete
two tongues in language
without speak
two--as one--
creation's peak.

Three?
Is but result of "WE"-
an ocean born of river...
Four
a mystery longs for more-
a desert's night in shiver.
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(you put up a poem about math after the week me has had in tax hell???)    lol

this poem is so damn cool ...
and proof that there is no simple math or simple rhymes baby....
rhyme divine ... dont for get those vials when ya mail me  
*kisskiss*
me

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


doreen peri
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5 posted 2001-04-21 09:15 AM


seems simple... it all adds up.... but it's very complicated sometimes, isn't it?

this poem is sumthing wonderful, a total equation

....in addition,  it says so much  

Wilfred Yeats
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6 posted 2001-04-21 11:14 AM


I skipped the math -
I love the communication

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7 posted 2001-04-21 07:11 PM


I was never that good at math. . . but I like this poem. . .



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8 posted 2001-04-21 07:24 PM


Seren...probably one of your best....with or without the equations....
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9 posted 2001-04-21 11:45 PM


Serenity~
Hope 10 doesn't mean you're down-for-the-count !  

LOL @ JanetMarie !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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