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walker
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0 posted 2001-04-20 09:25 PM


Your touch is not ordinary,
your hands glide.
They rest just where,
our spirits connect.
Surrendering my mind.
Ultimately leading me,
to want more of you.
Your kiss,
bends my will.
It veils itself from your true nature.
It makes me plea,
begging for another kiss.
Your touch,
your hands,
your kiss,
capture me,
skin deep.



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-04-20 09:43 PM


Your touch is not ordinary,
your hands glide.
They rest just where,
our spirits connect.
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oh yes.. this is very cool....
succinct, sensual and hungry.
so much emoted in so few expressions
well done walker

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-20 09:45 PM


this is wonderful!! Know the feeling...and it's really cool when it goes soul deep    SEA
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3 posted 2001-04-20 10:07 PM


The touches and kisses that leave one begging for more are always the best ones...excellent writing.
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4 posted 2001-04-20 10:16 PM


beautiful feelings, very sensual write....enjoyed much...


Greeneyes~

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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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JLR
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5 posted 2001-04-20 10:23 PM


The message travels quickly from the skin to the mind.  And it is the mind that makes the touch irresistable.  And the heart?
Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-04-20 10:23 PM


Walker...
This is a very sensual piece you have penned!
There is nothing more satisfying than a kiss from the lips of one you love....excellent!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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