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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-04-20 03:49 PM


A race to win though win just what?
A dream, a goal a choice a spot.
Yes a place in a scheme to further early thoughts.
Wrought from a mind figuring all perceived,
distraught through the brain
when closeness recedes.
To the reached aim just within fingers grasp.
To the sought name , the name that may last.

From a short fall it is easy to rise to ones feet,
To stand firmly still far from defeat.
Learned & far further prepared.
To strive on ever & ever,
to the inkling once reared;
© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-20 03:52 PM

I liked this VERY much!   SEA
helen smith
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2 posted 2001-04-20 06:53 PM

yes  craig  I   like it  toooooo..... I have always known it is a race to be run...   and nice to hold hands  as we go
thecraig
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3 posted 2001-04-20 08:55 PM

You swirl me with your praise.      
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