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0 posted 2001-04-20 02:06 PM


Silhouettes
By: Noah Eaton
4/19/01

Black velvet angel
Comes to sing to me in the middle of the night
She softly caresses my heart
Warming it with her desire, melting my heart in bright light

Passions showers go off in fusilades
As her silhouette fades to light, me and my love face to face
Coming from the reaches of space, from the soft mask of eve
Embracing her lovely body, shimmering in purity’s haze

Luscious lips sway in pleasure, chained in ethereal desire
Locked with her in passions heat, laughing in heavenly jubilation
Celebrating this jovial honeymoon under the dancing heavens
Lurid poppy laces burning against the bright cantaloupe dawn morning

Soft pineapple rain patters upon her warm wet skin
Her lovely scent of heaven entices me further into her love
Eyes closed in complete comfort, seeing each other in bleeding muses of our love
Caressing her soft waistside as I hear her heart beat against mine, fluttering like a soaring dove

Painting our special world together, with the gentle touches of lovers fingertips
Breathing her gorgeous love into my heart, in soft rosiness
Her silhouette becoming crystal clear to me
Seeing my love lathered in all of her loveliness

And slowly she fades away, melting into the first light of day
Her vision still swims in my head, only replaced by her satin secrecy
My veiled lover, dressed up in her passion
Time waiting to reveal her love to me, in all of her perfect beauty



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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-20 02:22 PM


Wow.  Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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2 posted 2001-04-21 11:19 PM


Transparent love from an angel. This is spring time rising from real warmth. My Guess is this vision is closer with heart felt mutual returns.
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