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lunatic
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0 posted 2001-04-20 01:43 PM


Sun rises, moon stays
Together they share the sky
Orbs ruling aloft

[This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 04-20-2001).]

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Packratmike
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1 posted 2001-04-20 01:46 PM


Very good!

Mike

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-20 01:47 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Just A Woman
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3 posted 2001-04-20 02:05 PM


Welcome to Passions!  I enjoyed this.  Very nice job with it.



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Waseem Cheema
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4 posted 2001-04-20 02:22 PM


Welcome to forum.
Excellent job.. Carry on.
          ~Wasi~

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-04-20 02:27 PM


very cool imagery
Welcome to Passions !!  
nice to meet you.

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


Corinne
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6 posted 2001-04-20 03:06 PM


A lovely Haiku!

Corinne

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7 posted 2001-04-20 03:18 PM


Welcome! I like this very much    SEA
Zinsser
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8 posted 2002-05-16 03:52 PM


Isn't it just beautiful when this happens
Love it
~~ Connie ~~

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