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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2001-04-20 10:01 AM

echoes
of yesterday
a lifetime lived before
calls on my heart to remember
all that was shared, and more
ripples through time
echoes

~SEA~

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-20-2001).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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1 posted 2001-04-20 10:05 AM

excellent cinquain!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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2 posted 2001-04-20 10:14 AM

Wonderfully expressed, many will relate, I'm sure. A perfect cinquain

Take care,
Melissa~

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

3 posted 2001-04-20 10:29 AM

Like the verse...I guess the first and last lines aren't being counted??? Cinquain means 5 lines.

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2001-04-20 11:12 AM

Kathleen and Melissa, thank you, but VAS is right, it's not a cinquain, I mis counted...I added extra stuff....opps, oh well, it's Friday, and I get to coast too...

SEA

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-20 11:34 AM

GR8 Octain

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-04-20 11:36 AM

Still, sentiment remains....

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-04-20 12:45 PM

oops I knew it was close to a Rictameter

still very well expressed, at least it makes an almost perfect rictameter (if you add a line with 10 syllables)!

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-20-2001).]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-04-20 01:25 PM

a tender memory....thanks for this...

Lauren~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Marge Tindal

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9 posted 2001-04-20 09:14 PM

SEA~

What a beautifully perfect SEA~ Septette~

Just how original can you get, poet ?

And ... did I say PERFECT Perfect perrrrrfect ?
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Balladeer

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10 posted 2001-04-20 09:22 PM

Every time I think you're just another pretty face, you come up with something like this to show you are so much more...

SEA

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11 posted 2001-04-20 09:32 PM

Interloper~ thank you

Sunshine~

thank you so much

Melissa~ I did the other one as a Rictameter....but I liked this one this way

Greeneyes~ thank you

Marge~ perfect....I thank you so much for that! LOve you too!!

Balladeer~ you think I have a pretty face?

thank you....and then....thank you

~SEA

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

12 posted 2001-04-21 12:18 PM

Excellent.........SEA

I love to nice poetry.

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