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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-04-20 09:30 AM



Dreaming
Of you touching
Places within my heart
Reaching deeply into my soul
I can feel you here beside me, even
as the night brings us such sweet sleep
While you are peacefully
In your own world
Dreaming


~SEA~


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-20-2001).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-04-20 09:31 AM


Beautiful!
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2 posted 2001-04-20 09:37 AM


"sweet dream are made of these" ...
you have mastered these lil gems girlie  

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


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3 posted 2001-04-20 10:30 AM


SEA~
You little cutie pie poet ....
I love this.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-04-20 10:57 AM



Lovely work, in a capsule of passion.

             Coal

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5 posted 2001-04-20 11:32 AM


SEA ~ I think you have mastered this form of expression.

WELL DONE!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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6 posted 2001-04-20 11:36 AM


ahhh!!!  
Dreaming...
Need those.
Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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7 posted 2001-04-20 11:44 AM


wow......."gulp"
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8 posted 2001-04-20 12:06 PM


WHOO HOO! YOU GO GIRL! that was great.. man.. I wish I could write like that.. Maybe you could give me some pointers *wink* keep up the good work
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9 posted 2001-04-21 11:28 PM


Sea Intertwined through "dreams from the heart"    I felt your poem was unabridged .  

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10 posted 2001-04-22 02:09 AM


*sigh*



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2001-04-22 07:16 AM


Beautiful form and sentiments SEA, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2001-04-22 10:05 PM


I love the peace of this!  Almost like a lullaby.
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13 posted 2001-04-22 10:26 PM


Very nice SEA *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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14 posted 2001-04-22 11:42 PM


                        Waking
                   To the soft feel
           Of moist breath on my neck
             And a warm hand upon my chest
    Brings a smile to a tired and sleepy face
          And joy to a brand new morning
             That will be better still
                 When you too are
                        Waking

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15 posted 2001-04-23 07:05 AM


Uss nay Tupti hoe pishani par jub hath rukha
(When he put his hand on my hot forehead)
Rooh tuk a gae taseer maseehae ki
(Its impression of the miraculous powers of Christ come up to the soul)

I love to nice poetry.

SEA
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16 posted 2001-04-23 09:05 AM


Sunshine~ thank you  

Janet~   thank you  

Marge~you're the cutie pie   thank you  

Coal~thanks  

Interloper~ thank you sweetie  

Bernie~definately.....   thanks  

PK~ thank you for the wow......very much  

5 SK~ thank you  

Craig~thank you  

Sven~       

Kit~thank you!!  

JLR~ thank you for that....very nice  

Maureen~ thanks!  

Jamie~ are you awesome! Thank you for that....

Waseem C~  thanks  

~SEA

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17 posted 2001-04-23 10:53 AM


sounds like a stunning dream to me!
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18 posted 2002-03-24 12:54 PM




(smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever dream away with your love and wake up to see your dream lay there before your very eyes happily with you! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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