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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-04-20 01:26 AM


Hey Passions, I hope things are going fine....I'm kinda pissed at y'll for not sending me my magazine that had my Astronomy poem in it...if any of you moderators see this...know that I'm dying to see my poem! Anyways, I don't like this poem but, I hope y'll like it....peace!

Poets paradise is a vibrant paradise,
for all poets to reside, in the afterlife.
It's a place where one can write non-stop,
twenty-four hours around the clock.

Poets paradise, is beautiful place with sparkling waterfalls
and hieroglyphic poetry, scribed on golden, egyptian walls.
Poets paradise, is where one can expand and shine,
and write better rhymes, enhanced through time.

Poets paradise, is a place where greats like Poe lay,
where you may, catch a famous rhyme from them everyday.
It's a glorious place, full of peace and serenity
a place, where the essence of beauty reigns infinity.

It's a place where poets recite their rhymes loud and proud,
while floating through the skies on puffy, cumulus clouds.
It's a place where angels sing songs of love,
a place, where God smiles down from above.

It's place for you and I, when we die,
it's a place where you and I, can kiss the sky.


© Copyright 2001 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2001-04-20 01:30 AM


Im ready for a place like this NOW...I like this Nathan
Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2001-04-20 01:44 AM


Thank you Paula, for reading.

Nathan

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-04-20 08:12 AM


Sounds like a peaceful place to me Nate.  Well done

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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