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Mysteria
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0 posted 2001-04-20 12:26 PM




^*^ LIFE ^*^



Such a precious gift

Life is dust in your own hands

Don’t blow it away

~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~

© Copyright 2001 Mysteria 1997 - All Rights Reserved
Waseem Cheema
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1 posted 2001-04-20 12:56 PM


YES.........Thanx for nice advise

I love to nice poetry.

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2 posted 2001-04-20 12:56 PM


And so well said

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-04-20 01:43 AM


Wonderful advice, thanks for sharing!!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-04-20 02:19 AM


I wouldn't think of it.  Good write, Mysteria.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Mysteria
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5 posted 2001-04-20 02:50 AM


Waseem: Thank you for coming from India to read my little thoughts I appreciate it.

bslicker: Nate Dogg: Thanks for the read.

Auguste: I am so glad you say that so loud and proud, some do not!  Thanks for reading.

~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~

KokoStewartKoomoa
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6 posted 2001-04-20 03:46 AM


Never! Good advice!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-04-20 06:51 AM


Ah Mysteria ... so much said in so few words, such a wonderful message encapsulated in this lovely Senryu, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2001-04-20 08:08 AM


Wisdom abounds.  Beautiful.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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9 posted 2001-04-20 09:09 AM


solemnly given
holding ages of wisdom
whispers rebounding

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10 posted 2001-04-20 05:21 PM


Koko - thanks for stopping in!

Kit - Life can be gone in an instant - just a reminder to savour every drip of the juice!

Gentle Spirit - We are all blessed with this wisdom it is what we do with it that counts, and I thank you so much for reading.

Sunshine: beautiful reply - thank you so much, such lovely words.

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11 posted 2001-04-24 11:23 AM


was thrilled with your second line...very nice
Mabel A. Dilley
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12 posted 2001-04-24 01:32 PM


I too am in favor of the second line. Dust to dust...

"I am not now that which I have been."

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13 posted 2001-04-24 02:49 PM


faterider: Thank you for enjoying my haiku.
Julian: Glad you liked it.

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

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14 posted 2001-04-24 07:39 PM


Mysteria~
You would know how profound I believe this to be~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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15 posted 2001-04-24 07:57 PM


Yup!  Gotta agree mucho!

jwesley

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