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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
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bc canada

0 posted 2001-04-19 11:26 PM



one day i was walking down the street
i thought about what makes me go on
what makes me get up everyday?
hope is what makes me go on
when the day seems rough out of control
thinking about a new tomorrow
nothing is impossible
every hardship one has only can make them stronger
i am only of a ripe age yet see the world from
knowing eyes
many judge knoledge on age
age means nothing
it is what u learn from experiance
if u let it break u down or
let it make u grow stronger
so many r blind to what is around them
they don't want to see the real world
who would blame them
the world is a hard place
but someone has to deal
or who else will take on the load to help everyone
as i see it life is a long journey
many lessons to learn many places to go
u only get what u take out
there is a long way to go until it is over
i'm ready to face it r u?
in this journey called life


© Copyright 2001 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2001-04-20 08:13 AM


At some stage we have all been, or will be, guilty of not seeing what is around us. But I know too that eventually we all see the light, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
2 posted 2001-04-20 09:50 AM


*jumps on scarlet* hey sexay!!!! yay i hope u like it here hunnay!   *hugs* i like that alot. its so true. very good description me thinks. *licks* love you hun, tiff
Godsend_1
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great state of illinois
3 posted 2001-04-20 10:13 AM


my sweet raven   how you like it here so far you have a great talent raven so keep writing ok  i acctually felt your poem it was great i love you raven have a great dayok i will talk to you today
Godsend_1
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4 posted 2001-04-20 10:14 AM


hey tiffany how ya doing lol i am umm just typing stuff i love you tiffany with all my heart

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-20-2001).]

Godsend_1
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5 posted 2001-04-20 10:14 AM


ummmm ok delete this one ok lol


[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-20-2001).]

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision
6 posted 2001-04-20 02:37 PM


lol ben u dork! i love you too hun
hmm u edited those:P *wonders wut u changed*

tiff

Godsend_1
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Posts 247
great state of illinois
7 posted 2001-04-21 05:09 AM


wouldnt you like to know hun but guess wut its a secret you cant know mwahahahahahahaha oh abd btw raven you rock

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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