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Sami
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since 2001-04-08
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-19 10:56 PM


waiting for you
like i always
said i would.
but i always meant it
as a more metaphorical way of speaking.
i didnt think id be
sitting here
expecting you to show up
to surprise me
and beg for me back
but with every car that drives by
and every minute,
then hour
that slips away
i see youre not coming back
and im lost in this
fantasy world
where you still give a damn.

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

© Copyright 2001 Samantha Masales - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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1 posted 2001-04-19 11:03 PM


I remember years ago waiting for the unmistable sound of a VW beetle coming up the drive...a desperate wait, even when I heard it, I knew it was only a temporary fix.  
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2 posted 2001-04-20 02:35 AM


Sami,

So very sad this is.  I wish you well.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-04-20 03:38 AM


Pure agony and you wrote it well...love make ya do torturous things sometimes...sigh...and hugs!
Sami
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Posts 49
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2001-04-20 09:18 AM


thanks so much for reading this one...and it felt like pure agony while waiting there for him to show up...
~Sami

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
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ontario canada
5 posted 2001-04-20 11:27 AM


WELL ITS A LIL SAD BUT THERE AINT NO LONGER WAIT THAN, TO SEAK FOR THE UNESPECTED LOVE
juanrodriguez
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ontario canada
6 posted 2001-04-20 11:28 AM


WELL ITS A LIL SAD BUT THERE AINT NO LONGER WAIT THAN, TO SEAK FOR THE UNESPECTED LOVE
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