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Open Poetry #13

This Dark Cellar of Sound

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-19 07:10 PM

I think my voice may break
into this dark cellar of sound
where only Emily's dread could tread
dray drivers corner down park streams
gladdened am I to think of soft sweet soil
mixtures of rock and clay
ever molding in heated caverns
only gentlemen call after the hour at noon.

"I am not now that which I have been."

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-04-19 07:18 PM

Totally intriguing piece but I can't say I understand it.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-19 07:21 PM

This piece reads well. I'm going to have to mull it over to derive your meaning. Joyce

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-19 07:36 PM

You've portrayed a lot here.. I enjoyed this piece. Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-19 10:47 PM

Oh you got into it alright this time didn't you? I darn near had my tongue twisted off with this exercise too I might add! Mommy help! Either it is golfing or going for a cart ride with Emily? he he Help!

p.s. I don't care how dumb I look - tell me what it is about LOL!

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-19-2001).]

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