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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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Pakistan

0 posted 2001-04-19 04:30 PM


Just say me once
I am yours and you are mines
When the spring has on trees
Blossoms became flowers
They absorbed their fragrance
And when  
Dew fall on the leaves
Then you
Just say me once
I am yours and you are mines
When the rainy season has become
Black clouds spread all over the sky
Bards and animals has gone to their home back
And when
It rains up to its full extent
Then you
Just say me once
I am yours and you are mines
When the sun is being setting
Rays of sun come
While cutting the edges of the earth
And when
Everyone busy in his worship  
Then you
Just say me once
I am yours and you are mines
When the moon is full
Shining at its full swing
And when
You and me alone at a riverside
Share our lives
Then you
Just say me once
I am yours and you are mines


~Wasi~




I love to nice poetry.

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 04-20-2001).]

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helen smith
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1 posted 2001-04-19 04:47 PM


And when you write  I  just say this once .......... you break my heart ..........it is  lovely waseem
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-04-19 06:23 PM


Nice expression of your feelings Waseem...James
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3 posted 2001-04-19 06:27 PM


I love this Waseem.  Your English is beguiling and makes the poem even more effective.  Joyce
JLR
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4 posted 2001-04-19 06:35 PM


So full of your heart...a wonderful poem!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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5 posted 2001-04-19 07:12 PM


Beautiful poem!

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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