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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-19 04:15 PM


Christmas away
from home
Is never fun
But probably less so
When a dogface
In Vietnam.
Charley
Likes to make
Christmas
A time for sorrow.
Just me and a few
Marines
Sharing K rations
Packed in 1942.
Lucky Strike green goes to war
Twenty years later.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-19-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-19 04:16 PM


Very good,  It was lonesome for we who were left behind, also.  Joyce
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-19 04:21 PM


the faces still cry
on those left in by and bye
people, once, all, all

Just A Woman
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3 posted 2001-04-19 06:24 PM


This truly touched me.  I find it sad, how many forget too easily, just what our men went through.  Am saving this.  My compliments, Interloper.



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Corinne
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4 posted 2001-04-19 11:01 PM


Well inspired!

Corinne

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5 posted 2001-04-20 10:49 AM


Interloper.....Semper Fi.   Bob
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6 posted 2001-04-20 11:11 PM


You know...we up here (Canada) could never quite understand this war, not at all.  I have seen the damage done to your men who migrated to Canada, and it simply breaks my heart.  This poem is excellent as a reminder of the sacrifices those men and women made in honor of their country (and think the government made a huge mistake getting involved!), but what do I know?

~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2001-04-20 11:18 PM


Interloper~ this hurts to read.....so sad and definately heart touching  hugs to you    SEA
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-04-21 01:57 PM


not much one can say
years have passed, memories stay
haunting moments bay

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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