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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2001-04-19 03:59 PM

To Venus

As Saturn finally departs Taurus
and Venus turns in her tracks,
the gravitational wave
sets us reeling.

Come Goddess,
remove the bindings
of Saturn’s rings,
these colorful prisms
are actually prisons
that have mired us
in obscurity.

We can take flight,
Aphrodite,
in your luminescence.

© ’01 Corinne Bailey

[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 04-19-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-19 04:25 PM

You've done it.....

again!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-19 08:12 PM

Beautiful. I loved it.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-04-19 08:33 PM

Corinne,

A change of pace
A bit of lace.
A wonderful write
A beautiful grace.

Enjoyed, *L*

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2001-04-19 08:55 PM

Wow, this is beautiful, Corrine, excellent writing here..

-Tier

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

5 posted 2001-04-19 09:02 PM

Corinne its very nice to see u in planats..~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-04-19 10:04 PM

Pure beauty, Cor. I love the way you write and hope you are doing well.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-04-19 11:09 PM

very nicely done, Corinne...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-04-20 12:22 PM

Corinne~
Very nicely done.

I liked the way you did this verse -

'Come Goddess,
remove the bindings
of Saturn’s rings,
these colorful prisms
are actually prisons
that have mired us
in obscurity.'

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-04-20 10:11 AM

I wish I was a goddess

enjoyed this!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

10 posted 2001-04-20 10:35 AM

Corinne.....a wondrous sky. Bob

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

11 posted 2001-04-20 03:25 PM

Thank you, Sunshine

Fading Away - thanks!

Sy - you are sweet, Sy!

Temptress, I'm doing well, and thank you, hope you are doing fine, too!

Deer - thank you, sir!

Marge - thank you so much!

Kathleen - you are, you are!

Bob - yes, wonderous, yes.

Corinne

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

12 posted 2001-04-21 12:37 PM

I just love it when your star writing. I hope your stars are shining brightly these days.

Park

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2001-04-21 08:02 PM

this is a flight I would love to take. . .

wonderful Corinne. . .

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