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BirdeeB
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0 posted 2001-04-19 01:57 PM



Mold me
show how
perfect
I should be
The perfect doll
with beautiful
blues, not like the
cat green ones
I have
With the blonde
hair that you like

Make me walk the perfect
walk
build me that smile.

Make me feel
surreal

Pull me away from
your play ground

Prove to me that
I have to be the
perfection that you
seek to show
everyone

I found bliss
and ignorance
in your stare

Your grasp

Turn around and
look upon
the hand that rocks
you

Whisper those thoughts
away little one

Take me in whole,
I am here to catch you
as you fall.

I saw those hands
touch you ever so slightly

Did you see me?
Did you see me fall....



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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-19 02:13 PM


Personally, I like green-eyed blondes ... very much.  

Well done.  You have conveyed your feelings well.  I felt the fall ...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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