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She Waits For More.......
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She Waits For More....... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He whispered He wanted to touch me Softly……… And so he touched He whispered He wanted to taste me Slowly………… And so he tasted He whispered He wanted to take me Savagely……… And so he took I whispered I wanted him to give me More……………. ~SEA~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. I get more showers this way. I'm gonna have terminal "prune skin." Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Wow!! Doesn't begin to describe the finese with which this was accomplished. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA. . . have I mentioned that we're still holding that table for you in Adult??? wow. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All I can think to say is .. this gives new meaning to "whisper burn" ROFL *winkiewinkie* LOL you must have got the raspberry tea I sent ya  LOL @ Interloper its a long time till hubby gets home girlie.. better put on the Prince records.  I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ or should I call you prune boy? thank you JL~wow works great for me thanks Sven~ I told you...too shy....  but thank you Janet~ you know I love that tea.....and actually it's listening to Prince that gets this going..... I just turned the CD off...lol! And yes, a long rainy day of waiting for me.... ~SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
damn girl...i have to agree with sven, get a room! LOL just kidding |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SHY? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PK~ get a room? I have several..... Sunshine~ yes........... ~SEA |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Oh He is looking very cute and ....claver like me...he he he I love to nice poetry. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Woohoo!!! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Sorry SEA....I couldn't resist doing this: I whispered I wanted to touch her Softly.... And she slapped me I whispered I wanted to taste her Slowly.... And she turned bitter I whispered I wanted to take her Savagely.... And she called a cop She whispered She wanted to give me a restraining order.... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ you made me laugh so hard.....good grief that was funny...thank you SEA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oh dear lord...*wooohoooo*  great one SEA... Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Hope he gets home soon...for both of your sakes. LOL@patratmike |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Bravo, Sea, very niiice... *smiles* -Tier |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
SEA, Oh goodness! I think I can learn something from your writing that might improve my own. Powerfully sensual. Great work! Michael Proust- |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ok liked this so much..... reply'g on the title.... STOP WAITING!!!!!!! Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh My! This was very sensual. You two may have whispered but these words are loud and clear ;-)..Hot and Sassy. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea I will whisper that your cup of sensuality is flowing over...James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
.... there you go again!! ohmeohmy!... what's gotten into you?.... lol......sounds like someone's got good taste!! ...someone told me i had good taste once and i said, "yeah? my taste is all in my mouth".... but anyway, about the poem.... sounds like fun!!! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I love erotic poetry that says it all with a tasteful subtlety. this is excellent writing.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The mystery of women (Male POV) I will probably go to my grave - trying to understand "savagely" - (not to say I can't remember being young and reacting ~G~ I loved this - but i'm sure you figured that out ~S~ |
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Celebi Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 17 |
Oh My! ~Celebi~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
(Cheesy purring noise) |
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