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vandana
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0 posted 2001-04-19 11:59 AM



Misty Morning,
Dark clouds,
This morning
As I woke up,
I look at the time,
The time Is running by,
I was waiting for you
To come,
The you came along,
You smiled at me tenderly,
I saw something
In your eyes,
I saw clouds In your eyes,
I saw a dream
In there too,
There was a misty
In the coulds,
I couldn't clearly see
What I saw in clouds
In them,
But I know,
There was love  hidden
Somewhere In the clouds
In your eyes,
I had seen love hidden
In your eyes,
I knew ,
You would love me
As I wanted to be loved by you,
Your eyes twinkle
As you came closer to me,
You took my breathe away,
When I see clouds
That surrounded my heart,
In your eyes,
I could see everything....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 04-19-2001).]

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Embers_Before_God
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1 posted 2001-04-19 12:07 PM


Thanks for sharing your poem...Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

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2 posted 2001-04-19 12:09 PM


Very nice!
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3 posted 2001-04-19 01:05 PM


you always amaze me with how you speak the words of love. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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4 posted 2001-04-19 02:16 PM


As I wanted to be loved by you,
Your eyes twinkle
As you came closer to me,
You took my breathe away,
When I see clouds
That surrounded my heart,
In your eyes,
I could see everything....
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such lovely imagery and sweet sentiments
wonderful sincere writing vandana
well done poet!!!!!  

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


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5 posted 2001-04-19 08:13 PM


Nicely done!  Bravo!

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-04-19 08:36 PM


VanDana~
Just lovely, hon.
It is so pleasing to see you in touch with
those lovely feelings.

'I knew ,
You would love me
As I wanted to be loved by you'


*Sighhhhh*
~*Marge*~

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Waseem Cheema
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7 posted 2001-04-19 08:57 PM


Yes Love is always in Eyes.....Explaining itself to the word. No need to tell anyone...  ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

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8 posted 2001-04-20 02:42 AM


This is nice.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

kitkat
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9 posted 2001-04-21 07:30 AM


I enjoyed reading this. The eyes never lie.
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