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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-04-19 10:35 AM



To Be Gone With the Wind...

to be the earth and fire and wind,
the water, land and air
to breeze the sky
and float the clouds
to fly from here to there
to view below from up above
aware of all it seems
to sing the songs of natures gifts
and soar on feathered dreams
to perch upon the greening trees
and rest the day away
releasing fears, to spirits lift
enjoying earth's display

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Embers_Before_God
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1 posted 2001-04-19 11:34 AM


Very nice . . . thanks for sharing . . . Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-04-19 11:41 AM


to sing the songs of natures gifts
and soar on feathered dreams
to perch upon the greening trees
and rest the day away
releasing fears, to spirits lift
enjoying earth's display
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ahh yes...our never ending desire to fly ...
very cool title and employ of metaphor and imagery.
well done offering for Earth Day.

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


vandana
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3 posted 2001-04-19 11:48 AM


enjoy
Parker
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4 posted 2001-04-22 03:16 PM


Very lovely piece for eathday.... back to the top.  

Parker

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-22 04:58 PM


very refreshing, nice poem, Maureen....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2001-04-22 05:00 PM


This is very nice.  I enjoyed it.  Imaginative but I did not have to struggle to decipher its meaning.  Joyce
Cerenity
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7 posted 2001-04-22 05:28 PM


I Love this Wynter its so beautiful and a fitting one for today, thank you so much for sharing,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-04-23 05:55 AM


Embers
thank you for stopping to read and leave  your imprint *s


Janet Marie
Happy to please *s

vandana
thank you  
  
Parker
thank you for the bump..it was soft enough  

Thank you Kathleen hope you are feeling well...huggsss

Joyce
it's always nice to be understood  

Cerenity
thanks C..I love when you stop by  ..hugggzzzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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