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Pieced Memories... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Captive Soul I saw you today a little differently than the last time more jovial more relaxed making me laugh and smile even though I was trying not to making me wonder why I was allowing myself to be caught up in you. Maybe it was the crooked smile you sent my way my eyes painting your face wanting to smooth out soften and lift up the lower edges of your lips with a touch, a kiss. Maybe it was the look in your eyes what lay behind them a warm glow wanting to ignite a flame in me signaling a want a desire to see more feel more, be more with me. I saw you differently today even though not trying to and wondering now, why I was allowing myself to be caught up in you. ~Wynter *w "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Maybe it was the crooked smile you sent my way my eyes painting your face wanting to smooth out soften and lift up the lower edges of your lips with a touch, a kiss. Maybe it was the look in your eyes what lay behind them a warm glow wanting to ignite a flame in me signaling a want a desire to see more feel more, be more with me. Whew...this is poetic tantalization here. Maureen, you have done a great job. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Are you PeeKing in on me this morning...just kidding..I actually was looking over poems from this time last year..and it was written then with some subtle changes today..I hadn't been posting here 'til fall. thank you ~softsmile~ Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I saw you differently today even though not trying to and wondering now, why I was allowing myself to be caught up in you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Were you looking, Wynter, with eyes or with a different mind set? Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I look with my feelings, interloper, and they usually are right on the nose as to what is true..*s..I have great intuition...sometimes I wish I didn't. I am one of those persons although I have that need now for reading glasses..I am one who can see a black bug crawling across a black floor........what that means..don't ask 'cause I don't know...I am giving you more info than I am sure you ever needed to read...must be a lonely day for me *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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