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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ATTITUDE Virginia Salter Cat hair in my pancake dog do on the lawn anguish in the pantry life without a song Where is my perspective gnarled up in attitude colored by anxiety as ebony crude Fear of consequence while time clicks the day actions of negligence looking oft away Waiting for the moment to undo an error made an eternity in the making of dark and frightful shade With tiny inkling of hope that when the hour’s arrived my sanity and vanity will somehow have survived Closer opportunity promising element of peace soon my eyes and ears gain chance for sweet release What shall be the outcome a dark pit or sun-glazed hill a smile filled with joy or a somber, bitter pill. ©April 11, 2000 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Virginia...so many of your poems indicate a spirit of thoughtfulness and integrity--I can tell that you are a person who turns an honest discerning eye to self and works hard DAILY on self improvement. I truly admire that and enjoy your work very much.  |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Outstanding work within this poem. Very insightful and intospective. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I choose the smile. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It looks very great..but really i did not understand the logic......he he he |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
THis is very interesting. Very cleverly written nice job.--Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all, glad you enjoyed! |
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