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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-04-19 09:22 AM

I can't have you
though I'd love
just one taste
one time
one moment
to steal
a moment
to feel you
to hear you
to see you
yet it's impossible
for so many reasons
we both know
you are
forbidden fruit
and I
am not Eve

~SEA~

Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-04-19 09:30 AM

some things are worth buring in hell for....
take a bite of the apple ..
only you and Adam will know

cool poem of temptation Sea

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-19 09:33 AM

SEA! Free verse!

You go girl!

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2001-04-19 09:37 AM

Janet~ I'd know and that makes the difference.....no bites for me....

Sunshine~ thank you

~SEA

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2001-04-19 09:37 AM

Be Eve if only in your thoughts and dreams...this was a longing I can relate to...be well...

Lauren~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

SEA

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with you

5 posted 2001-04-19 09:37 AM

Lauren~ that's where I keep it...nice and safe

thanks

SEA

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-04-19 09:42 AM

I hear ya Sea-girlie...
dont do the crime if ya cant do the time

SEA

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7 posted 2001-04-19 09:48 AM

Janet~ lol.....yes, exactly...love ya girlie girl

SEA

PoeticKnight
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8 posted 2001-04-19 09:53 AM

Awesome free verse SEA. I love the ending imagery...forbidden fruit and eve...what kind of fruit, I wonder though? LOL

SEA

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with you

9 posted 2001-04-19 10:30 AM

PK~ I'm glad you liked.....as for the fruit.....I'd say the sweet kind....

SEA

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

10 posted 2001-04-19 10:43 AM

Excellent, Sea! Loved the ending to this. Perfect.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-04-19 10:45 AM

well done in it's simplicity *s
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2001-04-19 11:34 AM

SEA---I love this--and sometimes the world is an orchard of temptation!

Sounds like YOU won't be late for supper tho!

Great job with this one, lovie!

SpitFire
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13 posted 2001-04-19 12:09 PM

~Sea,...hopping in line here to add my thoughts on this. It's well written, and also something that I think many can relate to. But yes,...have them where they're safe if tasting the forbidden is out of the question for you. Take care. Enjoyed reading. *Peace.

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

14 posted 2001-04-19 01:06 PM

Wow. Now I see why your were "absent" for a while. Really recharged your batteries, no?

BRAVO!

Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Gemini
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15 posted 2001-04-19 02:23 PM

Better off left just where you left it. Tempting fruits of human frailty, I know how you feel.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

16 posted 2001-04-19 04:18 PM

Free verse this good makes me jealous! Very nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

shadydaze
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17 posted 2001-04-19 04:51 PM

i guess you may alreday know, but this makes a great read. i can understand your feelings here, too. keep it up.

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2001-04-19 06:21 PM

Enjoyed this very much Sea...James

JLR
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19 posted 2001-04-19 06:41 PM

Wish I'd stopped to consider these thoughts. Great poem...love that last line!

Balladeer

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20 posted 2001-04-19 11:22 PM

SEA, can I interest you in some forbidden fruit-of-the-looms?

Mysteria

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21 posted 2001-04-19 11:25 PM

Smart girl! Great poem.

~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~

bslicker

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state of mind

22 posted 2001-04-20 01:07 AM

hmmmmm....

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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23 posted 2001-04-20 01:06 PM

Any thoughts beyond telling you this is great fled my poor mind when I read Bal's comment... I can only ROFL! *G*

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