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gremlin
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0 posted 2001-04-19 12:42 PM


A new Beginning of the end.
A fresh new start again.
"Sad Joker," wispers WIND.
GRASS answers, "He'll make it, I believe."

"Crying Fool," SUN shines on him.
"No, It's different now," MOON's glow reply.
"I'm with the MOON," hurls the SEA.
Unable to catch a breath, laughing FIRE will die.

"I'm dying for you," says falling LEAF.
"I'll laugh with FIRE," drools crying RAIN.
Dying fire gargles, "I can't stop, but maybe if..."
It dies this stops the pain.

I feel relief, Oh! I can feel again!
I am slowly crawling out from my hole.
Now i can stand, walk, run and then...
When I am looking down the hill,
I'll think, "Thank you, GRASS, and MOON,
and SEA, and even falling LEAF for giving me the will."


02/26/2001


Enjoy,

Stan

© Copyright 2001 Stanislav Skobelskiy - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-04-19 01:39 AM


Very nice, Stan.  Joyce
helen smith
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2 posted 2001-04-19 11:07 PM


hellooo..I have visited your poem many times  ..the new beginning of the end sticks with me too ,,it is  nice  eh ?       We can all have a fresh new beginning and if we listen to the signs  all  nature does  offer      us encouragement .   pretty
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