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since 2000-05-01
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Corpus Christi, tx

0 posted 2001-04-18 10:02 PM


SO CLOSE TO DEATH
I SEEMED TO STRAY
BENEATH THE GROUND
BENEATH I LAY
COLD AND LONELY
FULL OF HATE
A DREADED TORTURE
LEAD BY FATE
DOORS AND DOORS
I SEEMED TO PASS
MIRROR, MIRROR
THE LOOKING GLASS
THE GATEWAY TO HELL
WILL NOW BE OPEN
NOW I KNOW
THAT I AM CHOOSEN
PASS THE PIT
PASS THE DOME
UNDER THE GOOD
IS WHERE I ROAM
WITH THE EVIL
WHERE OF ANGELS
THERE ARE NONE
DEEP IN HELL
WHERE I COME FROM.

A POEM WRITTEN IN MAH SADDEST OF TIME. MANY TRAILS I WAS GOING THROUGH THEN.

© Copyright 2001 Yvonne Garcia - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-04-18 10:23 PM


and as you lie
within the pit
so paralyzed
with all of it --
within the gloom
encased in tomb,
you'll wonder at
the fall of it
and think about
the if and doubt
and how the death
embraced you so --
one day there's peace...
you never know...

....... hey!!! nice write... enjoyed this... i was buried in it  

thanks for the inspiration and i hope you didn't mind me tagging on to your thread

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 04-18-2001).]

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