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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-18 06:33 PM






growing green with spring



yellow golden red shall fall



white shall grace my limbs




© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-18 06:46 PM


Pretty pictures, too  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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2 posted 2001-04-18 06:46 PM


you damn well got the grace part right  
Haiku ... is you.
(see my post...a question to your challenge)

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


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3 posted 2001-04-18 06:58 PM


and we will watch. . . and know. . .

excellent my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2001-04-19 12:17 PM


you are incredible - 3 pictures three lines - i'm in awe
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I LOVE the middle picture.....the way you did this is SO beautiful!!    SEA
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6 posted 2001-04-19 01:00 PM


Medics!! My heart stopped with the white birch. Dear me this is pure poetry.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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7 posted 2001-04-19 05:19 PM


beautiful
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8 posted 2001-04-19 06:17 PM


W W!

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-19-2001).]

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9 posted 2001-04-19 07:33 PM


Beautiful pictures, and beautiful words!  Nicely done

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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10 posted 2001-04-19 07:34 PM


Lovely, dear one!!!
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11 posted 2001-04-20 01:37 AM


A very beautiful presentation!

Nathan

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