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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-04-18 01:54 PM




Circling
             columns
Clouds
        climbing
                  collectively

Cirrus
        controlling



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1 posted 2001-04-18 02:25 PM


Just gotta show off, doncha?

What wonderful creativity.  Actually, we have probably come to expect the acme from you ... and we are usually provided with just exactly that.

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2 posted 2001-04-18 03:04 PM


He he...you go girl!  That was pretty darn awesome!  I love haiku, and perhaps today I shall throw some at you too!  (my lord, that actually rhymed...I am trying that stuff too hard I think    Fantastic haiku.

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VAS
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3 posted 2001-04-18 03:05 PM


Lovely, Lady!!!
Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2001-04-18 04:34 PM


oh how I envy your ability to add such pictures to your wionderful poetry  
Sadly I have the pics AND my own - but not the talent -
The best part LIW  - is you can make these a part of your book - which I've no doubt you will publish - (don't disappointment me)

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5 posted 2001-04-18 07:12 PM


I love this!!!

Who says that haiku have to be in-line???

Great work Lady!!

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Alan
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6 posted 2001-04-18 11:25 PM


I like the looks of this. Wonderful work
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