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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-04-18 10:43 AM


Red Is My Favorite Color

Blue is alright.
It sure makes the sky look nice.
Green is cool I must admit.
The grass and trees appear
to be quite content.
And I do appreciate the sun, moon and stars
shining nice and bright,
sparkling and glowing
in all that yellow light.
Anyway I bought my sweetheart
a red silk negligee today.
I know she'll look good in it
when we find the time to play.
It fits her nice and tight
and seems to entice my hand
across her silky skin
thru the middle of this night
seeking to uncover
my favorite sensual places
in the land of soft lips and breast
and silky kisses and heavenly caress.
Certainly a lovely way to rediscover
that red is still my favorite color.

Jameslee@April18,2001


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-18 11:04 AM


aha....
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2001-04-18 11:04 AM


Well now.....the title caught my eye because red really is my favorite color.....but the poem itself is hot!!!, and perfectly suited to the color!!!  Nice work, and I'm sure she'll love it!!!!  

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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3 posted 2001-04-18 11:10 AM


ahh James ... youre cute and clever today
red rhymes suit you well  
spicy and nicy SBJ

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Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


Honeybee
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4 posted 2001-04-18 11:13 AM



Woo hoo for James!  

A clever write here, RED is my favourite colour too!~

Take care,
Melissa~

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5 posted 2001-04-18 07:24 PM


You know James. . . we can help you with this over in Adult. . .  

great one my friend. . .

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6 posted 2001-04-18 07:34 PM


Great poem...glad I red it!
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7 posted 2001-04-18 09:02 PM


Ahh..yes..may favorite color too.   Nice work, and I echo Sven.  

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

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8 posted 2001-04-18 09:04 PM


Ah, sweet James~



~*Marge*~

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9 posted 2001-04-19 01:45 AM


James Michael,

I think I've just changed my favorite color from blue to red.     A lovely sensual piece this is.  Great work.  I enjoyed it much.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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10 posted 2001-04-19 10:03 AM


WOW I enjoyed this soft piece....Red is a stunning color....very vivid images...


Lauren~


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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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Martie
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11 posted 2001-04-19 10:26 AM


James--very sensual and pleasing to read.
Paula Finn
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12 posted 2001-04-20 01:47 AM


Sweet James...yes red is definitely your colour!!!!!!!
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2005-07-19 11:01 PM


Thank you all for the wonderful responses...there is something special about red...James
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