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gremlin
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since 2001-04-18
Posts 25
NY, USA

0 posted 2001-04-18 05:48 AM


Being Me.
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Who shall he be who sleeps within,
the minds of those and all.
Who shall not be striked with mud to fall,
and mixed with dirt forever shall not be.

The death compared I to endless memories,
dig deep the steps of mine.
For all to see who're bound to die not mud nor dirt,
But being free, by simply being me.


Inspired by King Lear.
Stan


© Copyright 2001 Stanislav Skobelskiy - All Rights Reserved
Kicking Kim
Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!
1 posted 2001-04-18 06:43 AM


I liked this poem it was very deep and meaningful, it spoke wise words.  Well done!  Interesting, intriguing and inspiring!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-04-18 08:36 AM


Welcome to Passions!  This makes a lovely first post, of many, we presume...

check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-04-18 09:25 AM


The death compared I to endless memories,
dig deep the steps of mine.
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But being free, by simply being me.
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very cool entrance ...
Welcome to Passions poet sir,
enjoyed the premise, intent, and vocabulary of this one.
I look forward to more of your work, nice to meet you.

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


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