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slipknot
Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2001-04-18 03:57 AM


Hour after hour
Day after day
My thoughts have been of you
No escape which I can find
Nor do I long to.

When we first met
There you were
All quiet and cute
By the end of the night
Any thought we were willing to share.
I felt a tear when the end was in sight.

Is there more
Than one wonderful night
Or should I go back
To the way I felt before
Doing so would be such a fight

Such captivating thoughts
Beautiful eyes
And of course your kick ass hair
I gotta ask of you
Is there a chance for more?

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-04-18 10:31 AM


With certain people that we meet, one night could hardly be enough!!  I loved this, and especially the 'kick-ass' hair!!!!  Enjoyed to the max!!!!  

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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