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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-04-17 08:28 PM




Where there's a core
find a path.
Way to make new plans,
eternal tools
four fingered one thumb hands
Build, guide, shield, create,
from the core of where we are to where we want to be,
learning new to see;  
Creation expanding from the tiniest thought,
material substance arranged,
brought bought;  
Living absolute purpose
enabling true life
growing beyond set limits
unknown to brush passed strife;  
Holidays, Celebrations,
festival flavouring camaraderie,
healthy guidance
or
commandeering fragments of unnatural control ?  
From the core survival rolls,
starts directing human soul;


© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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1 posted 2001-04-17 08:35 PM


I agree. Where there is a core, there is a way...or at least, there should be. Bob
Kay
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 70

2 posted 2001-04-17 08:39 PM


I'm dizzy!  Enjoyed!

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

thecraig
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3 posted 2001-04-18 03:27 AM


Thanks Bob & Dizzy please settle with excitement. Shall check both your poems
helen smith
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4 posted 2001-04-18 11:21 PM


I  have had many peeps at it Craig ..I sit here  reading   and thinking    ,thinking and reading...
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