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Fee
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0 posted 2001-04-17 03:56 PM


Close your eyes and follow me
into my secret journey.
A place I go when I feel the need
to escape from reality.

This place has no rules
no boundaries or lies,
No body who will judge you
or to critisize.

So sit back and think of things
that truely make you smile
Even if it is only
for a short while.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2001 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-17 04:14 PM


Yes, memories are a very wise place to visit, now is a good time to do so.
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2 posted 2001-04-17 07:45 PM


think of things
that truely make you smile
Even if it is only
for a short while
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It IS worth it!  Good thought well expressed.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2001-04-18 07:49 PM


in those memories. . . we can find quiet relief. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Just A Woman
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4 posted 2001-04-18 07:51 PM


I think we all need that one place or person in which we can escape a bit.  Nice job with this one.



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

JLR
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5 posted 2001-04-18 08:05 PM


A vacation from reality...what a great thought, if only for a short while.
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