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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-17 01:44 PM


How I hunger to look deep into your eyes
                             (Your love nourishes me; addicting nector)
I feel my lost heart soaring into the skies;

To feel my heart’s rhythm, yes, even the skips,
                             (Your love clothes me, protects me in every way)
while I savor the sweet softness of your lips;

To hold you gently in my arms as we kiss,
                             (Your love caresses me like a fine spring mist)
we give ourselves completely to that sweet bliss;

To share a love so overwhelmingly true,
                             (Your love is my Gibraltar giving me strength)
and to share that pure love with no one but you;

To hear you whisper those words of love to me,
                             (Your love is the soft whisper that stirs my soul)
knowing that you and I shall always be WE.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-04-17 01:48 PM


someone's in love!  Great!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-04-17 02:44 PM


Oh I do believe spring has sprung a well of words from your heart....

what NOT about this do I like?  nada....

and the presentation is wonderful!

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3 posted 2001-04-17 03:21 PM


I like this very much... especially the last verse. *S*
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with you
4 posted 2001-04-18 04:32 PM


Love this...wish I could get the hubby to put pen to paper like this for me....   SEA
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