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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-17 01:24 PM


Golden ray of sunshine thou art well received
warming first my body, thence to my bowed head,
finally to this receptive heart, conceived
to spring forth in hope for what lies ahead.

Going is winter's cold, replaced by promise,
evidenced by thy presence, herewith, to all.
Oh, warm sunshine, bathing all with thy brightness,
I humbly accept thy warm gift of spring's call.

Well recieved thou art, anticipated too.
I am anxiously awaiting thy coming
for I have been too long living without thee.
Thy omnipresence over all is shining.

And may it be so forever and always.
May it please thee to shine upon all my days.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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1 posted 2001-04-17 01:58 PM


Interloper...."..may it please thee to shine upon all of my days..." Such gentle warmth. Very good. Bob
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-17 02:43 PM


What a very warm, poetic offering to Persephone and all that she brings forth come this Spring....

This is so very lovely, would it bother you much if it were to take place in my very private library?....Hummmm?

helen smith
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3 posted 2001-04-17 07:47 PM


beautiful..you do know how  to make someone feel welcome
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