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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-04-17 12:25 PM



Flowing  Dreamscapes

Dreams we could sail
At the speed of knots
Forget all ifs and buts
In saying “why nots”

Ask when and where
Don’t be asking why
Have the inclinations
At knots we could fly

Adventursome spirits
Dreams we can  chart
Desire and tendency
Sailing  heart to heart

Sail the sparkling sea
Flowing nautical miles
Neath the zillion stars
Moonlight and smiles

Flowing dreamscapes
On seas far and wide
Romancing the ocean
With you by my side

Hope ©2001

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1 posted 2001-04-17 12:30 PM


pleasant, lofty images
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-04-17 12:48 PM


Flowing dreamscapes
On seas far and wide
Romancing the ocean
With you by my side
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Love it.  More, please.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2001-04-17 06:24 PM


Beautiful pictures you have painted for us  
Kicking Kim
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4 posted 2001-04-18 05:54 PM


Lovely imagery used, you have put a nice smile on my face, interesting, intriguing and inspiring.

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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