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vandana
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0 posted 2001-04-17 11:58 AM



Let us keep a secert,
Shhh...
Don't tell It to anyone,
Now we are one,
We can share this love together,
No one can tear us apart,
If love Is meant to be,
If we keep this love alive
Like this forever,
Let the world think
We're crazy,
But we are In love,
They can see through our eyes,
If love I meant to be
If we can keep a secert,
As long as we live,
And If love Is meant to be,
We are young and
our song Is still playing
on the radio,
Let us dance all night,
Star are so bright,
Le us be together forever,
Let me hold you tight,
If love Is meant to be,
If our love is on our side,
If the time Is meant to be,
If love is meant to be

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 04-17-2001).]

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Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
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1 posted 2001-04-17 12:19 PM


This is a tremendous poem, I really like the thought of saying its a secret because secrets are considered as very special most of the time and so is love1  I like this as a metaphor!

Truly appreciative
^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-04-17 12:47 PM


I KNOW love is meant to be ...

Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2001-04-17 07:58 PM


"Our song is still playing on the radio."
James

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-04-17 09:24 PM


Keep the secret, keep the love.  I hope for you.

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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