Ribbon of Jet .................. [for Julian]

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Open Poetry #13

Ribbon of Jet .................. [for Julian]

Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-04-17 10:00 AM

Ribbon of Jet

sunflowers shall wave
at ribbons of white lofting
golden quilting green

Julian still waves
in little child delighting
ribbons stream above

lifts a hand to touch
and imagination soars
to fly back and forth

so the dreams shall stream
as ribbons wave at the thought
poet’s ~ motion ~ flies

Kicking Kim
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1 posted 2001-04-17 10:54 AM

This poem creates a brilliant atmosphere! I like it very much and think it is very intriguing!

Truly appreciative
^*~Kicking Kim~*^

Martie

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2 posted 2001-04-17 10:55 AM

Delightful!!!

SEA

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3 posted 2001-04-17 11:15 AM

Sunshine~ this is beautiful.....I love sunflowers.....

SEA

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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4 posted 2001-04-17 03:04 PM

This is delightful! Not only is it written structually accurate, but total in its delight. I never fail to stop and watch a jet stream or a rainbow. ~Julian

"I am not now that which I have been."

Mysteria

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5 posted 2001-04-17 03:31 PM

Simply a beautiful picture in my mind. Lovely poem.

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