Open Poetry #13 |
Labor Pains |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Labor Pains Abused but not amused my mind, Rebels creative labors bind. And though I wait the poem be spawn. It feels to me a breach stillborn. The baptismal tires' me. False ecstasy born agony. And myopia is my fault The end of my nose is my vault I cannot judge my issue. Even be it toilet tissue. Will it live or will it die? And the unanswerable why? So if you could and be so kind To please relieve my petty mind By jotting down a yea or nay You would in kindness make my day. And if poetry be your vice Please treat me like a little spice. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Abused but not amused my mind, Rebels creative labors bind. And though I wait the poem be spawn. It feels to me a breach stillborn. The baptismal tires' me. False ecstasy born agony. And myopia is my fault The end of my nose is my vault ========================== So if you could and be so kind To please relieve my petty mind By jotting down a yea or nay You would in kindness make my day. And if poetry be your vice Please treat me like a little spice. ========================== spice? ....like Red-hot-cinnamon ... to make a dragon snort flame Spice? .. darlin your poetry is the perverbial spice rack. YEA BABY YEA!!! *winkiewinkie* me |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yea- Poetry... it is my vice For you I have some good advice Keep writing, and I'll tell you why You are the bestest, my guy Sy.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are my red hot pepper my chili spice a little oregano and your thyme, caprice I mellow you out by addition of cilantro piquant you are and rosemary'd be droll if we didn't have your daily traveling salvation show |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Just writing so you know, I be by. I know those word are forthcoming, not to worry. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your issue's never toilet tissue (Though some verses make me cry) I'll read with glee all poetry That's posted by dear Sy! One more vote in the YES column!!! (But has Florida learned to tally ballots yet? *EG*) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So you give me a YEA Winkiewinkie. Randy and Stinky Nan, And I love you too. Sunshine, Sweet and spicy. *L* Julian, Just writing back a big thank you. Suthern, Very cute LOL *L* |
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