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Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

0 posted 2001-04-17 02:24 AM

With pain captured
upon my hand,
I blow it from my palm,
hoping to destroy
the final strand
and find the world still calm.

TkB
Copyright © 2001
All Rights Reserved

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

[This message has been edited by Embers_Before_God (edited 04-17-2001).]

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

1 posted 2001-04-17 04:15 AM

Dust in the wind! Let it go! this was short , but oh so deep. I kept it

take care

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-17 01:12 PM

I like this!!! Very cool!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-17 01:19 PM

Simple sweet and wonderful.

"I am not now that which I have been."

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

4 posted 2001-04-17 02:05 PM

Embers....interesting thought. I liked this. Bob

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

5 posted 2001-04-17 02:10 PM

Intelligent, intriguing and inspiring! Keep on writing.

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-04-17 02:38 PM

embers...this IS a wonderful thought...i loved it!!! helen

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

7 posted 2001-04-17 03:50 PM

Oh, how can I type as I am applauding so?!? This is absolutely wonderful, strong and powerful, and perfectly worded. This is a fantastic poem.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

8 posted 2001-04-17 11:50 PM

koko--thanks for keeping it

Brad--I'm glad you liked it.

Julian--Too kind, but thanks

Bob--thank you very much

Kim--I appreciate it

Helen--I am so glad you liked it.

dragonpoe--Thanks, but no applause...I'm quite shy

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