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monique
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since 2000-02-03
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0 posted 2001-04-17 12:15 PM


At the court in Livingston
With my son
Hoping to get out
Without a pout
I await his sentence
Knowing the price
Will be high twice
On the scale
Of his tail
Caught drunk
In his car he flunked
The test given by the cop
Gentle as he could drop
The news to me
I thanked him to be
Concerned for his safety




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Krawdad
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1 posted 2001-04-17 01:01 AM


Tough scene, but a nice write, monique.

Krawdad
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2 posted 2001-04-17 02:37 AM


This is a well written piece, with a very good message.  Thank you for sharing.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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