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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-04-17 12:10 PM



I have no photographs of you.
I remember one day
long ago
taking an entire roll
of nothing but you.
We were in Jenson's Meadow
watching the Monarchs dance
and I snapped one
with a butterfly
perched on your finger
like Mom's favorite budgie.
How shocked and surprised
we were
when it landed
on your inviting hand,
posing just long enough
for you to smile
and me to get the picture.
36 exposures,
capturing microseconds
of your life
(my life)
went into a pocket
and later a desk drawer.
I stupidly lost that roll
before this world
lost you
and now...
I have no photographs of you.
Not
one
single
millisecond
of your life
to hold in my hands,
to trace with my fingers,
to study for endless hours.
I have no photographs of you,
just untouchable
out of focus images
trapped somewhere
behind my closed eyes.

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

© Copyright 2001 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-04-17 01:12 AM


Of all the images made
which ones do not fade?

Krawdad
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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
2 posted 2001-04-17 01:14 AM


You always have the ones your heart holds...and those are the very best of all...hugs to you my sweet friend
VAS
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3 posted 2001-04-17 01:16 AM


My, this is powerfully woven and heartfelt. This one hurts.
Fading Away
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4 posted 2001-04-17 02:38 AM


Very powerful poem!
Nicely done!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-17 07:41 AM


If you really love someone, you have their picture already in your heart.  You don't' need anything more, although it would be nice   how sad this was!
vandana
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6 posted 2001-04-17 11:26 AM


enjoy
Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
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7 posted 2001-04-17 11:52 AM


"Taking an entire roll
of nothing but you"

Was the roll spelt like this to show 2 meanings? 1. that you were taking the role of the person and 2. to show how your life rolled around and you almost became someone else?  It is a very inspiring poem and I enjoyed it a great deal!

Truly appreciative
^*~Kicking Kim~*^

Sunshine
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8 posted 2001-04-17 11:52 AM


No, you have a memory....and you Kodaked it here quite well....

the imagery was wonderful!  Thank you for sharing!

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