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me and him |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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in my life, there's never been a you there's only been a me and he's been looking for that you from his very first day I thought that he had found you in her or she or her but, they weren't you and so, he kept looking and I kept trying hearing your voice in my dreams telling me that you were looking for him too and that I would know when you touched his heart but, you were still only a dream that he had a wish that I had made then one day, you came to him and I saw you as an angel the keeper of his dreams but, you were quick to tell him that you were no angel you had made your own mistakes in life but, that was past and, even though you had fallen you were still an angel in his eyes and I loved you for accepting his own shortcomings and my own mistakes you took me into your heart and gave him a home and I loved you for the life that you gave for the love that you gave a love that saved him from a lonely existence and a life of sorrow so, now he's found you and I have your heart and both of us couldn't be happier that we finally found you ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would ask who inspired you, but you have such a fertile imagination, I believe you probably just plucked this one out of your pocket! This, Sir, is excellent! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Sven! What a great concept, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, and I know that happiness such as this is waiting for us, somewhere. Sandra |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Fantastic write, Sven! Corinne |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Great job. Lovely thoughts. enjoyed the read |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful Sven, your work is always a pleasure to read take care Julie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh my Oh my Sven this is so touching, a beautiful inspiring piece my friend....well penned ~HUGS~ TRacie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. Sven... this is a wonderfully written poem! Very beautiful.. this is really breath taking. Fantastic job! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Well done Sven! Awesome poetry. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sven.... "you took me into your heart and gave him a home" beautiful.....just beautiful.....helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, This is a beautiful piece my friend....:-) Keep it up. Take Care, Laura |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nice to read poetry from the magical Sven Pen today. Beauty as usual, friend.  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, this comes from the same place the rest of them do. . . from my heart. . . thank you my friend. . . Kit, thank you. . . I wasn't sure if anyone would get what I tried to do here. . . thank you. . . Sandra, I know that it is too. . . I just wish that it would get here. . . thank you. . . Corinne, thank you my friend. . . Alan, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Julie, thank you and thanks for reading. . . Tracie, thank you my friend, it's always good to see your name. . . Marie, thank you! I'm glad that I could make you happy today. . . PK, thanks. . . I knew that you would like it. . . helen, thank you. . . as always. . . Laura, I'll try. . . thank you. . . Temptress, thanks. . . some days, it's easier. . . vandana, always good to see that you enjoy. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
always a pleasure...***** Lauren "Within you I lose myself |
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