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Passions Voice
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0 posted 2001-04-16 07:50 PM


Take my hand,
and dance with me in time.
The rhythm of the night
Matching the steps of our hearts.
A soft samba,
A beguiling beguine.

Move with me
Together as one
Flowing across the floor.

Spinning
Twisting
Twirling
Hearts beating,
Feet moving,
Bodies twisting.

All in time
To the rhythm of the night.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


© Copyright 2001 Diana Athena - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-04-16 08:14 PM


Good to see you again, I feel the beat!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-04-16 09:11 PM


PassionsVoice~
Ah ... Diana~

'A beguiling beguine.

Such a beguiling phrase !
Wonderfully presented.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-04-16 11:29 PM


I have always loved the rhythm of the night *s  nice, Diana

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Coal Surrender
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4 posted 2001-04-17 12:24 PM



  Carefree, and frolicking steps of rhythmic bliss.

             Coal

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-04-17 12:26 PM


Very gentle, tender, sweet sounds of music are drifting....
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-04-18 10:20 AM


Sounds like lots of fun...James
Rex Allen McCoy
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7 posted 2001-04-18 10:35 AM


Holding a pretty girl
with music in the moment ... I wouldn't know if I was dancing or not, until the paramedics
woke me from the coma

nicely written

Passions Voice
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8 posted 2001-04-18 07:22 PM


Irish Rose, thank you, it's nice to be back.  As the song says, "The Beat Goes On"!!

Marge, thank you!  I'm glad that you liked this.

Wynter, I'm just learning about it for the first time, but it's wonderful.  

Coal, yes, quite carefree!!  Thank you.

James, it is.  Care to dance??  

Rex, now, I would hope that you wouldn't pass out on me on the dance floor!?!     Thank you Sir!!

passion is life. . . ~Diana


Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2001-04-18 11:12 PM


PV, this one makes me want to dance!!  LOL.  Wonderful write and welcome back!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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